Hey everyone!
Today's snip is from DEMON AT MY DOOR, because I've been knee deep in edits, and haven't worked on anything new.
As always I will send everyone comment love in return :)
Scene: Exposing a secret
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LOL, I totally heard last week that hot dogs are the most dangerous foods to eat because of choking hazards.
Good snip, chica.
Love the voice. But you are such a tease with where you cut it off!!
OMG. You're a supernatural fan girl. I just noticed your AW icon. Excuse me while I squee everywhere because that scene with demon dean? It makes me...yeah...anywayyy.
I love this! I have a feeling I know where this deal is going. They never end well.
No hell for forty years, right? I'll cry because I love your MC.
I love the set-up for this book. I want to know what he said next!
I agree with Vero, you tease! LOL
And then?!?! you can't leave us hanging like that...okay, well, maybe you can, but it's still not fair!
Fun scene! Now I'm wondering if the LI I like is bad, tho, bc he's innto demons...NOOOO!!! Lol.
Oh, and I think you may want to tweak the wilting flower line--I love the image but I'm not sure I picture wilting flowers as crumbling--it almost sounds like a mixed metaphor.
Overall, love it, tho! :D
What happens next?!!! I love the voice. And Rick! I swooned when he said he wanted to know everything about her. OMG. Great snip! ^_^
I've always liked the snake scene - it's ironic to me. Great cut-off point :)
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