Tuesday Teaser Time!!

Tuesday, January 26, 2010



Hey everyone!! Thanks for checking out my current WIP. Your feedback is very much appreciated!! :D

Title: Demon At My Door

Scene: Movie Theater


Thanks for reading :D **Snipped***

15 comments:

Karla Nellenbach said...

haha! you had me at 'if i have a booger'! this is a great scene, very real and engaging. Good snip!

Race said...

"Well... um... why?"

I love it.

La-La-La-Laurie said...

Aw, so cute.

V.M.Pettingill said...

LOL!! I love the booger lined.. and how it was even turned into a sweet line: "And I’d still like you even if you had the biggest booger in the world."

Bee said...

Aww, this is so sweet!!
Looks like the good guy is back <3

lynkay said...

Oh I love mushy stuff like this. He would like her even with the biggest booger!!! Love it!

parametric said...

Aww! I have a secret love for people who find out that they're lovable just the way they are. I only wish I knew exactly what Rick likes about Nat's personality - I think that would tell us a lot about both of them. :)

Glen Akin said...

aww! really cute. Loved this scene so much. Brought back memories :)

Amna said...

so sweet and definitely cute <3

Mortem Twins said...

I wish I'd meet a guy like that...

Amanda said...

I lol @ the booger comment and loved how you turned it into a sweet thing. :-P

dystophil said...

Love character denial/repression. Nice teaser :)

Kathy Bradey said...

I think it's sweet how she's so self conscious about why he would be looking at her. Cute. Melikes lots!

Sarah said...

I agree with Kathy! I love the self consciousness. Very cute.

Karla Calalang said...

Hahah sooo cute! How I'd love to be in this situation with a guy (not the collecting her soul part though just the "I like you. What's wrong with that? ;) )

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