Hey everyone!! Thanks for checking out my current WIP. Your feedback is very much appreciated!! :D
Title: Demon At My Door
Scene: Movie Theater
Thanks for reading :D **Snipped***
Tuesday Teaser Time!!
Tuesday, January 26, 2010
Hey everyone!! Thanks for checking out my current WIP. Your feedback is very much appreciated!! :D
Title: Demon At My Door
Scene: Movie Theater
Thanks for reading :D **Snipped***
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haha! you had me at 'if i have a booger'! this is a great scene, very real and engaging. Good snip!
"Well... um... why?"
I love it.
Aw, so cute.
LOL!! I love the booger lined.. and how it was even turned into a sweet line: "And I’d still like you even if you had the biggest booger in the world."
Aww, this is so sweet!!
Looks like the good guy is back <3
Oh I love mushy stuff like this. He would like her even with the biggest booger!!! Love it!
Aww! I have a secret love for people who find out that they're lovable just the way they are. I only wish I knew exactly what Rick likes about Nat's personality - I think that would tell us a lot about both of them. :)
aww! really cute. Loved this scene so much. Brought back memories :)
so sweet and definitely cute <3
I wish I'd meet a guy like that...
I lol @ the booger comment and loved how you turned it into a sweet thing. :-P
Love character denial/repression. Nice teaser :)
I think it's sweet how she's so self conscious about why he would be looking at her. Cute. Melikes lots!
I agree with Kathy! I love the self consciousness. Very cute.
Hahah sooo cute! How I'd love to be in this situation with a guy (not the collecting her soul part though just the "I like you. What's wrong with that? ;) )
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