Hey guys! Thanks for the Teenage Hillbilly Love last week! :) Since I was a tease and cut you off...I'll post the very next segment of the story so you can see what he wanted to show her...
Snip from my WIP: Teenage Hillbilly Hell
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Thanks for the comments guys :)
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Ok, your MC is a total bitch, and I love her!! :) " I hope he doesn’t think my offer still stands, because he totally ruined that moment." LOL! Love the teaser. I wanna know what his dad being dead has to do with his lack of the...you know. :) More please!
oooo! You tease!
I totally love your MC internal thoughts, they are hilarious!
LOL! The internal dialog is AWESOME!
Yeah, that is a tease by definition. Very good.
Huh, you tell us you're going to show us then you leave us hanging...teaser :) It was great!!
I agree! More please :D
Dad!?! Why do you have to stop there? You're so cruel!
I know--this is a total Teaser! Seriously--what happens next? :) Oh, and love this line:
How is taking me to a creepy cemetery close to dusk going to explain anything—other than he’s a freak?
Lol.
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