Tuesday Teaser Time!!!

Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Hey guys! Thanks for the Teenage Hillbilly Love last week! :) Since I was a tease and cut you off...I'll post the very next segment of the story so you can see what he wanted to show her...

Snip from my WIP: Teenage Hillbilly Hell



Snip:

Thanks for the comments guys :)

8 comments:

Laura said...

Ok, your MC is a total bitch, and I love her!! :) " I hope he doesn’t think my offer still stands, because he totally ruined that moment." LOL! Love the teaser. I wanna know what his dad being dead has to do with his lack of the...you know. :) More please!

characterize said...

oooo! You tease!
I totally love your MC internal thoughts, they are hilarious!

VĂ©ro said...

LOL! The internal dialog is AWESOME!

Mark Brockman said...

Yeah, that is a tease by definition. Very good.

J.S. Wood said...

Huh, you tell us you're going to show us then you leave us hanging...teaser :) It was great!!

Horserider said...

I agree! More please :D

Sarah said...

Dad!?! Why do you have to stop there? You're so cruel!

houndrat said...

I know--this is a total Teaser! Seriously--what happens next? :) Oh, and love this line:

How is taking me to a creepy cemetery close to dusk going to explain anything—other than he’s a freak?

Lol.

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