Tuesday Teaser Time!!!

Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Hey guys teaser time! Thanks for reading my stuff and commenting, much appreciated :) I thought there were some really good posts last week, keep 'em coming!

So I posted a little something from a WIP I'm working on. :) Super rough cut!



Thanks for checking it out guys! And thanks for the feedback :)


VĂ©ro said...

I may just not been around enough, but I've never read from the perspective of a cheerleader before. I really enjoyed it, though the end is scary! Now I'm curious what has happened to her and what the story is about!

Karla said...

AH! Such a teaser! lol I really want to know what happens to her and curious about what else is going on in the story! Loved the teaser! :)

Anonymous said...

Great ending. There's some room for edits, but you already mentioned it's a very rough draft. I enjoyed reading it and am definitely interested in learning what will happen next.

J.S. Wood said...

Hmmm, you are a tease. I liked it.

houndrat said...

Hey, no fair--what happens next? :) Great teaser. I also loved the cheerleader perspective--it seemed very fresh to me!

You've got a few minor edits, but I'm sure you'll catch them later since it's a rough draft, but overall, I really enjoyed it!

Mortem Twins said...

awesome teaser!

for some reason, I knew something like that was going to happen. I hope she's okay...can't wait for the next one!

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