Tuesday Teaser Time!!

Tuesday, December 29, 2009


Hey everyone! Here's another snipt from my current WIP Demon At My Door

Scene: Dinner

Thanks for Stopping by :D

17 comments:

Amna said...

oooooooooooooooooo!

What did he do with the girl?

Stephanie Jenkins said...

I love Rick and Nat. *sighs* Great teaser, Annie. :)

Jamie B said...

Demon hooks me every time! I love your snips!

Angie said...

I"m very curious too now. What did he do? Great teaser. :)

Kristin said...

Hehehe. Fun dialogue. :D

iman said...

Oh I totally want to know more! Great job!

Krista Ashe said...

Sighs....I so love Rick!! I'm totally pulling for him over that douche Stew, lol. Great dialogue and chemistry between the two!!

choco (In Which a Girl Reads) said...

Wow, LOVE the voice and the dialogue! And so intrigued about what he did to the girl :)

Heather Dougherty said...

Talk in circles much?

I love this. This has great voice, I'm hooked!

Sumayyah said...

Great voice and I'm hooked. I love how he scarfs down his burger - reminds me of my cousins. Lol.

Lost Crayons said...

Great dialouge, the characters work so well with each other. It's so natural.

And I'm so curious about whatever he did to the girl, almost more than anything else. They way you presented it was just great.

Karla Calalang said...

I want to know what he did to the girl! Great dialogue too! <3's this WIP!

Lia Victoria said...

I am in love with your dialogue :D

Becca said...

Love this! But I'm really curious about the parents now. For some reason, I feel like there's more to it. Hmm... :D

Mortem Twins said...

Hahahaha <----This was my exact reaction to all of this. It's humorous and Natalie's voice is strong, but cute and there's so much other words that fit perfectly, but I can't grasp them. Love this!

La-La-La-Laurie said...

Oo, me like the mysterious boy. I wonder where this is going.

J.S. Wood said...

Interesting. I really want to know about his parents!! Needless to say, I love this story.

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