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Snip: Demon At My Door (SUPER DUPER ROUGH CUT)
Scene: Follows party-almost-rape scene. Here's who's at the door :)
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Yep---loved this in FNW and still love it! Woot for the rescue and especially love that last bit: She. Is. My Business. Great drama! :)
This is great. So much tension and drama. I agree with hound, the dialog at the end with the punches in between is awesome.
*Swoon* OMG I just love a guy who goes all nuts protecting his girl!
Awesome!! Love it. I like this Rick one a LOT better than the other men she's interacted with so far ;)
Awww I love that she is his business!!! :) :)
I'll second Houndrat when I say I loved it in FNW, and I love it here! Still gotta say I'm rooting for Rick even though he might not be what he seems.
Ooh, the language, naughty girl!!! hahahahah
“She.” Another punch. “Is.” And another. “My business.”-- LOOOVVED THIS!
OMG I have a new crush!! SQUEEE *blushes*
I thought this was AWESOME. One of the best scenes you've ever done. :D
Nice! I love the last part too with the punches in between saying the last bit of dialogue. Loved it!!
Great ending! Glad to read this ended up well for your MC...
OMG this story is awesome! And I'm fangirling over Rick right now! I LOVE him.
Wow, this was a really great scene. And I'm so glad Trevor got beat up. Ugh, I hate him.
Great snip!
Oooooo I love this scene :D I think I want to know more about Rick
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