Tuesday Teaser Time!!

Tuesday, November 17, 2009



Hey everyone!! Here's another snip from my Nano project.

Snip: Demon At My Door (Word Count: 326)---CAUTION SUPER DUPER ROUGH DRAFT :)

Scene: Book Store


Thanks for checking it out guys :)I enjoyed reading everyone's comments!!

10 comments:

Becca said...

Awww, this is precious. :D

Stephanie said...

Awesome job. I can't wait to get to know Rick a little better. *is addicted to bad boys* :D

Deniz Kuypers said...

Another NaNo'er! Hope your project is going well. Looks like it's off to a good start.

La-La-La-Laurie said...

Very nice. I am automatically interested in your MC

CupofDice said...

Love the simple, yet very showing picture of Rick with a bundle of books in his hand. Only really rough part I see is that she goes from being annoyed by him to being friends pretty quickly. Other than that, I love the interplay between them and the possibility it holds. And the mention of demons and 5 year old soul stealer, well I'm hooked!

Karla said...

Ohhh I'm interested in this! It seems really cool! Can't wait to see more from this!

Mortem Twins said...

You HAVE to post more of this. I think I'm hooked :D

choco (In Which a Girl Reads) said...

Great teaser!

Wonderful dialogue--love the "Are you my secret stalker?" line. Hahaha :)

J.S. Wood said...

I'm really liking this story.

Great scene, very vivid!!

Raven said...

Ooh I love this! I didn't think it was that rough. I would have liked a little more interaction between the two before she agreed to go to dinner with him, but the dialogue and the voice is awesome.

And I can't wait to learn more about Rick!

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