Hey everyone!! Here's another snip from my Nano project.
Snip: Demon At My Door (Word Count: 326)---CAUTION SUPER DUPER ROUGH DRAFT :)
Scene: Book Store
Thanks for checking it out guys :)I enjoyed reading everyone's comments!!
Tuesday Teaser Time!!
Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Hey everyone!! Here's another snip from my Nano project.
Snip: Demon At My Door (Word Count: 326)---CAUTION SUPER DUPER ROUGH DRAFT :)
Scene: Book Store
Thanks for checking it out guys :)I enjoyed reading everyone's comments!!
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Awww, this is precious. :D
Awesome job. I can't wait to get to know Rick a little better. *is addicted to bad boys* :D
Another NaNo'er! Hope your project is going well. Looks like it's off to a good start.
Very nice. I am automatically interested in your MC
Love the simple, yet very showing picture of Rick with a bundle of books in his hand. Only really rough part I see is that she goes from being annoyed by him to being friends pretty quickly. Other than that, I love the interplay between them and the possibility it holds. And the mention of demons and 5 year old soul stealer, well I'm hooked!
Ohhh I'm interested in this! It seems really cool! Can't wait to see more from this!
You HAVE to post more of this. I think I'm hooked :D
Great teaser!
Wonderful dialogue--love the "Are you my secret stalker?" line. Hahaha :)
I'm really liking this story.
Great scene, very vivid!!
Ooh I love this! I didn't think it was that rough. I would have liked a little more interaction between the two before she agreed to go to dinner with him, but the dialogue and the voice is awesome.
And I can't wait to learn more about Rick!
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