Tuesday Teaser Time!!

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Okay everyone here's another snip from my Nano project, so (CAUTION: REALLY REALLY RUFF DRAFT) LOL

WIP: Demon at My Door (Tree house scene--Ending a secret summer fling) Word count: 464

Thanks for checking it out guys!!!! :)


AggieW3thrGirl said...

Grrrr... Stew is a jerk! I'm glad she tells him off. Great last line!

Kaitlin Ward said...

OOH girl power.
As a random note: not enough characters are named things like Stewart. I like it.
And I like the snippet--I felt the anger right along with her.

Amna said...

'I only had one expectation of you, not to be an asshole. And guess what. Epic fail, Stewart'


Lee Bross said...

Oh what an ass!!!

Krista Ashe said...

OOH, I totally want to beat Stew's ass right now! I love the beginning how she's all hot and bothered about the night before, and then it's like here comes the screeching brakes!!! LOL
Great job. I can't wait to read it!

Anonymous said...

I like how this scene was turned upside-down halfway through. At first I thought I was going to be a love scene, but then it ended in a fight. Well done!!

Stephanie Jenkins said...

Love it, Annie! I'm pretty pissed at Stew right now. Great tease!

Mortem Twins said...

Ugh, jerk.

Anwyho....this seems so real, because I really felt for Nat. I think this relates to many people. And of course, I love the whole premise. Keep up the great work! I love your writing!!!

J.S. Wood said...

Great job Annie! I'll join Krista in beating Stew. I'm so glad she didn't agree to it. Yay for strong female MCs

Amanda said...

Go her! He's a jerk. I'm really glad she walked out. I love me a tough girl!

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