Once again, it's Tuesday Teaser Time!
This is another excerpt from: The Dying Curse (454 words)
You'll meet some new faces in this one :) Can't wait to see everyone's
Thanks for looking :)
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"More twins? I was defiantly not drinking the water at this place."
Definitely my favorite part of this, because it made me laugh. I'm so intrigued by this story, seriously!
I'm with Kaitlin. That was awesome. :P
Great snippet! I definitely want to read more!
Ooo, so awesome. I definitely want beta rights on this! :)
I'm with Kaitlin as well! :) Loved it. Hate Isis already and I've only known her for ten seconds.
"It’s so not sexy to have nervous-stomach-diarrhea on a date. I had to focus." lol such a great line.
Para!
I love the story....when am I gonna be able to read more? I love the nod to diarrhea not being sexy on a first date...so true! LOL....Isis is a major bitch who needs taking out! LOL
I like Isis, okay she may be a total bitch but those are the best characters in a story, right? Haha, this was a great snippet. Whoa, so many twins!
Awesome, girl. When do I get to beta read again? :D
I love Oakley completely snapping at the end. That was unexpected and hilarious.
Yay, vamps and dinner! :) And Isis is miss snark, isn't she. Silly bee-otch. But Oakley certainly put her in her place. Rar! Love a guy with spunk.
Lol I love oakley and how he put Isis in her place!
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Amna
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